Jasmine Hart

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Thanks amber. Nice to meet you too. You can call me Jas if you want. It's quicker to type! I posted again. :) Kit, any idea how long the characters ...

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Thanks Kit. You don't like short poems? Heehee. I was wondering why my stuff had gotten so long over the last few months! FRIDAY APRIL 11th I decided to be ...

Hmmm....I dunno Kit. I almost didn't read this because the title was putting me off, so I'd take a look at that. It feels a little bit like prose to ...

Thanks for clearing that up, Nate. I'm still not entirely sure that I agree, though.*wink*

*I know the plot is weak, any tips would be greatly appreciated. For the sake of three weeks, the island served as a haven, though I knew that I would ...

This is great, Snoink, really fresh and your imagery is striking. It flows very well as a whole. I love the weirdness of; "a tutu for your naked flesh, " ...

This is great, Lizzy. I love the story and the tone. The rhythm, as has been said, is a little off. Try reading it aloud so you get a sense ...

I love it. I prefer the first stanza to the second, it's more powerful as a whole and your imagery is at its most effective here. I feel that; "out ...

As has been said, this is raw and beautiful. You channel real power through it and express your emotions brilliantly. I think I'd break it up into stanzas, maybe two, ...

I'm not sure that I agree... Personally, I find that storybooks are a great help for story writing. I hadn't written a whole story in years until I started posting ...

I don't really know anything about rats...the only experience I've had with them is when one ran into my kitchen. My mum screamed and tried hitting it with a brush, ...

Tempest Tempest ate her breakfast, and, after saying goodbye to the dogs and letting them out into the back garden, where there was more than enough space for them, set ...

Thanks Kit. I'll take another look at it. I'm not sure I remembered my poem on Tuesday...that seems to be the first day this year that I haven't done one...it's ...